Concrete Language Rewriter

Rewrite abstract, theoretical, or jargon-heavy passages into sensory, schema-based language the audience can already picture — using three named techniques (schema tap, high-concept pitch, generative analogy). Use this skill whenever a draft sounds abstract, strategy-level, or theoretical and the user wants it grounded in concrete imagery the reader can see, hear, touch, or do. Activate when the user says "this sounds abstract", "make it more concrete", "feels jargon-y", "how do I explain this", "rewrite this pitch", "too theoretical", "simplify the language", "ground this", "make it tangible", "the reader can't picture it", "I'm stuck at the strategy level", "translate this into plain language", "make this vivid", "needs an analogy", "give me a one-liner pitch", "explain this to a 5-year-old", "we need a metaphor for this", or provides an abstract passage plus an audience and asks to concretize it. Also triggers when a mission statement, value prop, policy memo, product page, cultural value, onboarding doc, or training scenario reads like a thesaurus of abstractions (synergy, excellence, alignment, optimize, empower, leverage, robust, scalable, best-in-class). The skill does NOT invent fake sensory details to ground a claim the user has not actually made, does NOT score the whole SUCCESs rubric (that is the stickiness-audit skill), and does NOT write full narrative stories (that is the story-framing skill) — it produces a side-by-side before/after rewrite of each flagged abstract passage with the technique used and why.

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1. Add marketplace

› /plugin marketplace add bookforge-ai/bookforge-skills

2. Install plugin

› /plugin install made-to-stick@bookforge-skills

3. Use the skill

› /concrete-language-rewriter

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Made to Stick

Chip Heath, Dan Heath

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